Bleached-Angel

Yeah,,, I'm back, and alive. I actually went through something huge!! It's called

Boot Camp!!!

Damn right, I'm a sailor now guys!!!

Doing the same as Chameleonist and using it for my story Apokalypse instead of a comic sort of thing

How clichéd/bad is your comic story?

[ ] Your story takes place in high school
[/] Your story's main characters are teenagers
[ ] Your story has a love triangle 
[ ] Your characters have to save the world
[ ] Your female characters are all sassy
[ ] Your male characters are all rebellious
[ ] The main plot of your story involves who ends up with who 
[x] Your characters use magic (only one does and its after a traumatic event and everything)
[ ] You have more than five main characters
[ ] All of your characters end up with someone.
[ ] Your story is a BL/yuri/yaoi story
[ ] You have a character who's straight, but gets confused and falls in love with a gay person
[ ] Your comic is about wolves
[ ] Your comic has a bad guy who is bad with no explanation as to why he/she's bad
[ ] Your comic has an overly promiscuous character
[ ] You plug in fan-service wherever possible
[ ] You're making your comic just to draw write people making out/having sex
[ ] Your characters are human but have animal appendages (i.e. cat ears and a tail) for no reason 
[ ] You're making a manga that reads right to left, even though you're not Japanese and it's in English [definitely N/A]
[ ] Your story is a fan comic
[ ] All of your characters are good-looking
[ ] Your comic involves forbidden love
[ ] All of your characters have special weapons which they always carry around
[ ]  You main character has a rival who he'/she eventually becomes friends/lovers with 
[ ] Your comic has see-through speech balloons
[ ] Your character meets the person he/she will fall in love with in the first chapter
[ ] Your comic involves the four elements as a magical theme
[ ] Your comic has a good girl who falls for a bad boy
[ ] All your characters are goth/dress darkly
[ ] Your comic has a human who falls in love with someone who's not human
[ ] Your comic has a main bad guy, who your main character has to kill in the end
[ ] Most of your panels don't have backgrounds
[ ] You haven't considered a theme for your story 
[ ] When you don't know what to do next, you just add filler that has nothing to do with anything
[ ] Your story is really confusing and people have told you so
[ ] Most of your characters are vulgar/swear all the time
[ ] Your first chapter is really confusing to draw people in 
[ ] Within the first chapter, you've introduced ten or more characters 
[ ] You forget to carry through ideas you introduced early on in the comic [I'm actually really good at things like this because I'll write something small that seems like it's not important and then like six chapters down the road or something BOOM]
[ ] you beat people over the head with your opinions/beliefs and don't give consideration to the other side of the argument, and people have told you so on several occasions by debating with you. 

TOTAL: 1.5/40 xDD



How good/unique/good is your comic?

[ ] You have a beginning, middle and end planned out before you start
[x] Your comic has a theme/purpose 
[x] Your comic's main characters are adults or kids
[ ] Your comic starts with your main character already married
[x] Your character doesn't meet his/her love interest in the first chapter 
[ ] One of your main characters has kids
[ ] Your characters don't use magic 
[x] Your characters don't have individualized weapons they carry around all day
[ ] Your story is fiction - it doesn't have fantasy elements like magic.
[x] Your characters have real flaws and feel like real people
[ ] One of your characters has some sort of physical defect
[x] One of your characters has some sort of psychological defect
[ ] Your comic has a bad guy who your main character wants to save
[x] Your comic is NOT a romance comic [Romance is DEFINITELY a side plot oh man xD]
[x] You're not making a comic just to draw write people making out/love
[ ] You don't have any filler in your comic
[x] You have only a few main characters
[ ] Your story is simple as opposed to overly complex
[/] Your main character does not have a love interest
[ ] Your comic has solid speech balloons
[ ] Most of your panels have backgrounds
[/] Your comic doesn't have a villain [Do zombies count?]
[ ] You have at least one fat person in your comic
[x] Your female characters are strong based on their personalities and faults rather than how good they are at beating people with a weapon [I mean all we've seen so far is how they are with weapons but yea, i'm tryna do that]
[x] All of your characters dress differently 
[ ] The world you've created is unique, and your readers have told you so
[ ] Your comic is sci-fi
[X] Your comic does NOT have a love triangle
[ ] Your comic is about something you're passionate about/ you have a message 
[ ] Your comic does NOT involve forbidden love
[x] If your comic has gay characters, the fact that they're gay doesn't have to do with the main plot
[x] Your story has twists
[x] Your story has set-ups and pay-offs
[x] When your female characters talk to each other, they talk about things other than romance with boys
[ ] Your comic has an old person
[ ] If your main character is falling in love, he/she doesn't kiss the other person until far into the comic
[x] Your comic is NOT a fan comic fanfic
[x] Your main character is different at the end of the story than he/she is at the beginning
[x] Your characters all have different facial structures/silhouettes; they're all unique from each other and your readers have told you so
[] You put your beliefs/opinions into your comic, but you also show the other side of the argument as having its own merits.

TOTAL: 20/40



If 10 or less, rethink your story
If 10 or more, you're doing well
If 20 or more, you're doing fantastic!

Okay okay cool cool, but as Chame said there does need to be one for writing definitely.

Vanity
[ ] You carry a mirror eveywhere.
[ ] You carry beauty supplies everywhere.
[ ] You put others down. 
[ ] You flaunt or brag about yourself.
[ ] The only topic that interests you is you.
[ ] You don't listen to other's problems.
[ ] You wear booty shorts.
[ ] You wear makeup.
[ ] You enjoy attention.
[ ] You like to do things YOUR way and YOUR way only.
TOTAL: 0

Envy
[/] You feel negative about your body image.
[x] You don't have a lot of money.
[/] You don't have good grades.
[ ] You're insecure.
[/] Your living conditions aren't the best.
[ ] You cry a lot. 
[ ] You are bullied.
[/] You've never been in a real relationship or have been in a bad one. 
[/] You don't attract all the girls/boys.
[ ] You think everyone else has better things.
TOTAL: 3.5

Gluttony
[ ] You eat a lot.
[ ] You always get more than what you need.
[ ] You always have snacks around your house.
[ ] You drink a lot of alcohol.
[ ] You always have a granola bar or something in your purse.
[ ] You hide food.
[ ] You binge-eat.
[ ] You are normally warm.
[x] You can crack a lot of your bones.
[x] You often say, "I'm starving..."
TOTAL: 2


Lust
[/] You are very sexually active. 
[x] You have had three or more girlfriends/boyfriends
[/] You wear matching underwear.
[ ] You wear a lot of makeup.
[x] You have fetishes.
[x] You have looked up porn.
[ ] You are a fan of Yaoi/Yuri.  
[x] You are not a virgin.
[x] You have '"fantasized"
TOTAL: 6


Wrath
[ ] You never had a real relationship.
[ ] You go to anger management classes/used to.
[ ] You have to take special pills.
[x] You are aggressive.
[ ] You hate someone.
[x] You have hurt someone - physically or mentally.
[x] You back-talk people.
[ ] You have gotten detention before.
[x] You get into fights - verbal or physical.
[/] You are strong.
TOTAL: 4.5

Greed
[ ] You are wealthy.
[ ] You often buy things.
[x] You WANT instead of NEED
[x] You have expensive things. (but they're gifts? Some are at least)
[ ] You put yourself before others.
[ ] You can tend to be a little rude.
[ ] You don't try to save money.
[ ] You own more than two cars.
[ ] You own more than two credit cards.
[ ] You always have to look the best.
TOTAL: 2

Sloth
[ ] You don't do gym in school/don't try in gym.
[ ] You don't have the best grades.
[x] You procrastinate.
[x] You go to bed at ten p.m. and sleep until 12 a.m.
[x] You often take naps.
[x] You fall asleep in classes.
[x] You've often been called lazy.
[ ] You don't participate in class.
[/] You do the minimum amount of work.
[/] You seldom go to church. 
TOTAL: 6


I expected a higher wrath but I'm not really surprised by what I got.

I took this and the country meme from Chameleonist

A- Age:  

17, duuuude this is weird ;u;

B- Biggest Fear: 

Im gonna lose everyone because of my stupidity

C- Current Time: 

15:15 Mountain Time I believe

D- Drink you last had: 

Coke from Chilis xD

E- Easiest Person To Talk to:

Uhm... Chem and Miss Lucy, and some irl friends

F- Favorite Song: 

Uhm... Thats What I like by Bruno Mars, Swalla (simply because its catchy) uhm.... Hands Held High by Linkin Park

G- Ghosts, are they real:

Yea, i believe so

H- Hometown: 

Honolulu

I- In love with:

Pez

J- Jealous Of: 

A girl i shouldnt be jealous of, like legit look up the song Girl Crush, that describes me basically :/

K- Killed Someone?: 

xD you know there are moments where I think it might be my sister but thats just sibling rivalry xD

L- Last time you cried?:

hm.... a month ago over something kinda not stupid but im gonna pass off as stupid :/

M- Middle Name:  

Monet~

N- Number of Siblings:

One younger sister

O- One Wish:  

That i really believe what im telling myself

P- Person who you last called:

My boyfriend last night

Q- Question you're always asked: 

Why were you named Crimson

R- Reason to smile: 

Because i have friends who support and love me for me and are always here for me

S- Song last sang: 

Swalla, or thats what i like... actually im singing Issues rn xD

T- Time you woke up: 

10:30

U- Underwear Color:  

mint green with black polka dots and lace <3 u <3

V- Vacation Destination: 

Take me back to Italy ;;;;;-;;;;;

W- Worst Habit: 

Uhm.... wow idk xD i got lots of those, maybe over reacting?

X- X-Rays you've had: 

Uhm when I sprained my ankle they had to see if it was a sprain or a break

Y- Your favorite food:

right now I think its Korean food called Bulgogi <3

Z- Zodiac Sign: 

Capricorn xD

BRITISH 

[x] You drink a lot of tea.
[ ] You know what a brolly is.
[ ] Deal or No Deal has taken over your life
[ ] You wanted Ben to win X Factor.
[/] You use the word "bugger" or the phrase "bloody hell."
[ ]  Fish and chips are yummy.
[x] You can eat a Full English Breakfast.
[ ] You dislike Emos almost as much as you dislike Chavs.
[/] It's football.... Not soccer.

Total = 3


AUSTRALIAN

[ ] You wear flip-flops all year.
[ ] You call flip-flops "thongs" not flip-flops.
[x] You love a backyard barbie.
[x] You know a barbie is not a doll.
[ ] You love the beach
[x] Sometimes you swear without realizing
[/] You're a sports fanatic
[/] You are tanned.
[ ] You're a bit of a bogan.

Total = 4


ITALIAN

[ ] Your last name ends in a vowel.
[x] Your grandmother makes her own sauce.
[x] You know how a real meatball tastes.
[x] You know Italian songs.
[/] You have dark hair and dark eye color.
[x] You speak some Italian.
[x] You are under 5'10"
[x] Pizza/spaghetti is the best foods in the world.
[x] You talk with your hands.

Total = 7.5 (no freaking suprise omg)


SPANISH

[ ] You say 'member' instead of remember.
[ ] You speak Spanish or some.
[x] You like tacos.
[/] YoU TyPe LiKe ThIs On YoUr CoMpUtEr (only when super excited about something and i have no other way to convey it)
[ ] You are dark skinned
[x] You know what a Puta is.
[x] You talk fast occasionally.
[x] You have had highlights or have dyed your hair.
[ ] You know what platanos are.

Total = 4.5


RUSSIAN 

[ ] You say villain as: Vee-Lon.
[ ] You have more than one vodka bottle in your house.
[ ] You know the difference between channel 1 and RTVI.
[ ] You know of somebody named Natasha.
[ ] You don't get cold easily.
[ ] You get into contests all the time.
[ ] You can easily make do with the cold weather.
[ ] You can speak some Russian.
[x] You love listening to techno.

Total = 1


POLISH

[/] Your parents let you drink. (They don't know.)
[ ] You know what a pizda is.
[ ] You have Pierogi at least once a week.
[ ] People always ask to see your "kielbasa" checking if you're Polish.
[x] People randomly call you their best friend.
[ ] You have made/know what pisanki are.
[ ] You laughed when Poland beat the USA in the 2002 World Cup

Total = 1.5


IRISH

[/] You think beer is the best.
[x] You have a bad temper.
[ ] Your last name starts with a Mc, Murph, O', Fitz or ends with ay, on, un, an, in, ry, ly, y.
[x] You have blue or green eyes.
[ ] You like the color green.
[x] You have been to a St. Patty's day party.
[/] You have a family member from Ireland. (Ancestors)
[ ] You have/had red hair.
[x] You have/had freckles.

Total = 5


ASIAN 

[ ] You have slanty/small eyes.
[x] You like rice a lot.
[ ] You are good at math.
[ ] You have played the piano.
[ ] You have family from Asia.
[x] You laugh sometimes covering your mouth.
[ ] Most people think you're Chinese.
[ ] You call hurricanes typhoons.
[ ] You go to Baulko.

Total = 2


GERMAN

[x] You like bread.
[x] You think American Chocolate is good.
[x] You speak some German.
[x] You know what Schnitzel is.
[ ] You hate it when stupid people call you a Nazi.
[ ] You went to Pre-school.
[ ] You're under 5'4".
[x] You have been to Germany.

Total = 5


CANADIAN

[x]  You like to ride 4 wheelers.
[x] You love beer.
[x] You say eh.
[x] You know what poutine is.
[/] You speak some French.
[ ] You love Tim Horton's.
[ ] At one point you lived in a farm house.
[ ] You watch Degrassi.

Total = 4.5


FRENCH

[ ] You like French toast.
[x] You love wine
[ ] You speak a little or are fluent in French.
[x] You have eaten a snail.
[/] You like fashion.
[ ] You have been to France.
[x] You are either a Catholic, a Muslim, a Protestant or a Jew.

Total = 3.5


AMERICAN

[x] You like fast food.
[x] You call football football and soccer soccer.
[ ] You can trace your ancestry back to Ellis Island.
[/] You watch way too much TV.
[ ] You are obsessed with the royal wedding
[x] You have a dog.
[ ] You have a cushy job.
[ ] You were sad when Harambe died.


Total = 3.5

Italian.... no damn surprise lol